Review for The Wizard's Triad
(#) bgoldnyxnet 2010-07-24 11:32:47 AM
You also need to pay attention to continuity. In chapter 3 the letter from Gringotts refers to "Severus Octavian Snape", while in Chapter 4 he calls himself "Severus Tobias Snape".
The plot is interesting enough to keep me reading though.
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