the spider part was funny. Frank was a bit mean though, he could of simply said he needs a little space, he feels they need a little space. I want to see who he goes out with next. I like it how you have put the mom as she is brain washing him saying that all men are the same, also i like that you haven't put all boys as jerks and making him upset, but tom was OTT. I want you write more, because it gets better and better each time. I want to see Frank finding someone who really does like him, but he thinks he's going to end up dumping him or something... i don't know, your the amazing writer here, i just want to see Frank happy cuz he has had like 4 boys who have upset him, well 3 and a obessive boyfriend. I want to see what happens to tom as well how he said i'm not going to go out with anyone ever again. I think tom was over reacting that frank said give me some space and he said it was over. but the way frank lied then shouted at him saying to leav him alone. PLEASE PLEASE CARRY ON. i think this is the longest review i've ever written, sorry. xoxo
Author's response
Thank you so much (: It's actually the best review I've ever got.
It's sort of based on a relationship I had with a guy called Tom... He wasn't THAT obsessive but he was a little clingy. I tried talking to him about it but he wouldn't accept it. He wants to go back out with me but I like my freedom (:
But thanks for the longest and best review I ever got. And I'm glad you like my story aswell :D I was explaining the stupid theory to my friend who said I should be a writer and now here I am (:
Once again ~ Thank You
xoxoxo