Review for Serpent Souls, Merged as One

Serpent Souls, Merged as One

(#) Vanir 2010-08-05 02:08:25 PM

I continue to be interested. You didn't make a whole lot of the main characters in this chappie, but the illusion gag got us to know some of the supporting cast in a lovely way. The Goblin magic was a bit too pat for my liking, but it did clear the way for rapid developments. I'm staying tuned.

Vanir

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