I very much liked it:)
Most people can't get away with having all those crazy events happening one after another, but.. well, obviously, you did:P
And now I'm on to the next one!
(Good song, btw.. On To The Next One by Escape The Fate)
Author's response
Thank you so much. Feel free to send me some ideas. Considering I had to use the "Pee in the Airplane Kitchen" line for the last one. >.< And yes, it is a very good song.