Wow, i thought you were pro at this and everything until I saw that you wrote this was your first fic, and that's pretty fucking great if that was your first Rydon. This is probably one of my favorite Rydon's, it was very descriptive and a little original. Good job, you pretty much nailed it.
Author's response
Thank you, that really means a lot! I guess I've read so many Rydon's by now that it kind of came naturally.