You posted this. Excellent. The contrast of POV is neat, although Sephiroth's POV is my favorite - the fact that we never really found out what was going through his head in canon is what makes it so interesting, and you pulled it off well. The two descriptions of Jenova were beautiful. And I can definitely understand the urge to try and darn the edges of canon, as it were. Sorry this is not exactly concrit. XD