Review for Salvation
will improve the reading greatly. Story-wise there are a LOT of clichés, but i don't really mind.
Normally i skip stories with the amount of typos and errors found in the first chapters but this one was too captivating to leave.
Good going, and keep at it. I want to see the rest.
Sorry For The Strange Innuendo. Basically, Gerard Is On A Train When He Recieves ... A Note. Slashyn...
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