Just like the last chapter, this is less than interesting. Quite boring, in fact. Not to mention the chapter shortness and the lack of any events that appeal to the reader going on.
Author's response
Again, fair enough. I don't really see how a star offering to help you find your mate is boring, but then again, I'm biased since I'm the one who wrote this. Yes, the length of the chapters leave much to be desired. However, the chapters would've sucked (even more so, according to the readers on this site) if I had forced myself to write something longer.
As for the lack of events, I can agree with you there. My mentality was that I didn't want everything to happen in the beginning. This story isn't meant to be long--ten chapters at most. It would be boring (again, even more so, according to your opinion along with others of this site) if everything happened at once.
Thanks for the review.