Review for Shadow Warrior second version

Shadow Warrior second version

(#) adamovita 2010-09-29

Excellent story, can't wait to read more. I especially liked Harry's dream of Tonks, such bad point in the dream to wake up though.

The only complaint I have is just that you somehow copied the chapter and pasted it below the original.

Author's response

Thanks for reviewing, and pointing out the mistake I made.
I had filled out both areas for uploading text when I published this chapter and it ran the same story twice. I shouldn't have that problem in the future.