Okay I'm so late reading this story (although I don't mind having a TON of chapters to read all at once :D) but I wanted to add a few notes... maybe you know this already and wanted to write it your own way, but Mikey doesn't really have asthma and Frank is a vegetarian (he was eating a turkey leg in one chap). Just weird stuff I notice. But on the other hand, keep it up. This story has been really interesting. I think it would be cool if she had one boy and one girl, like her and Frankie :)
Author's response
Hey, thanks for the review I really appreciate you taking the time to write to me.
Firstly I understand completely that I am not writing the guys as they actually are, mainly because it feels to constricting for me to write them exactly how there supposed to be and partly because it would terrify me if I got it wrong!
I'm just glad that you enjoy it =)