Vampirekitten, I am proud to see your writing is improving, but where is the paragraphs? Story is progressing slowly. Just be careful of it becoming stagnant.
Author's response
Thank you so much. The reason a lot of my chapters have a ton of spelling errors is becuase I didn't have word so I couldn't spell check anything and the paraghraphs not being there is from copying and pasting from word so maybe the site messed it up but when I posted I tried to make sure of it also for a long time I was using this pda thing my mom had not a computer. What do you mean by stagnat?