Review for Paper Cuts

Paper Cuts

(#) MyNameOkay 2010-11-15

I Like Your Mini-Story Lines, But I Think You Need To Get A Story Line And Stick With It.. I Think You Could Possibly Make Something Great.
Oh, And There Were A Few Punctuation Errors, but Thats Okay;P


Author's response

You mean like chapters? I've tried that but haven't had much luck. Maybe I could try again. Thanks :)