Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness
To Fight the Coming Darkness
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-09-21 09:34:10 PM
I wish you'd have waited until you were done with the next chapter and submitted them together. GOD that's frustrating stuff. This isn't like most of the stories I read, this is in my top five of over a hundred...
Enough complaints. What Hannah and Chelsea did was unforgiveable, but then again, I felt like Ginny's actions were as well before finding out what Harry's had her doing. I hope you won't just forget to punish the Abbott sisters for that, and also for wanting to go to Dumbledore. People can be so frustrating.
You handled the aftermath of Hagrid's death brilliantly. I hope you don't have to handle too many more deaths in the story, but at the same time, a big part of me hopes that this won't be the end of the story just yet.
Enough complaints. What Hannah and Chelsea did was unforgiveable, but then again, I felt like Ginny's actions were as well before finding out what Harry's had her doing. I hope you won't just forget to punish the Abbott sisters for that, and also for wanting to go to Dumbledore. People can be so frustrating.
You handled the aftermath of Hagrid's death brilliantly. I hope you don't have to handle too many more deaths in the story, but at the same time, a big part of me hopes that this won't be the end of the story just yet.
Author's response
Oh but where is the fun in having the next chapter already ready? Glad you enjoyed the funeral and the frustrating Abbott sisters. We'll see how that goes. Harry has to survive the next chapter to punish them so we'll see what happens. Jim
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