I have read only the first two chapters of his story, and see no reason why it should be rated this low. I find it beautifully written and quite original. I have never before read a story from Narcissa's perspective, and I find it very insightful and quite good. Pay no heed to the bad ratings and keep writing. :)
~Fallen Avenging Angel
Author's response
Oh my, thanks so much for such a kind review! hugs I was getting a bit depressed with all the bad reviews. I'm loving your story, btw. Hope you keep it up! Hope you keep reading this too. lol :D