It matters because we're the ones reading it. Please use your brain before giving people shit, kay? Thanks. Btw, your story isn't that great. Try writing about someone else other than a child abuser, and write longer chapters.
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Okay, you are possibly the most spiteful person I've seen on here. I don't aim to please everyone, got it? I write because it pleases me. An if dimwit else likes it, then Good for them. If not? Their loss. This story, once again, was written at 3 IN THE MORNING. I'd like to see you write well that early. I wrote it for me. If you're not reading it because of something as simple as short chapters or the signing of a journal, then I fell sorry for the others you've reviewed on.
And Severus is one of the best characters in the series. I don't give people crap unless they for me crap. When someone's trying to help, I'm grateful. But when someone's being spiteful, I fight back. Please get over your obsession with nagging at people you don't know.