Review for Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

(#) Richardc269 2010-11-30 02:03:10 PM

Story is "okay". It's average at best right now, but you also need to fix all these grammar mistakes in the story, as well as some other things.

Author's response

Hmm, my beta didn't indicate any problems. I'll go through it again for the grammer mistakes. The extra wide spaces between paragraphs I have no idea how to fix at this point.

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