Review for Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis
(#) ImNotRomeo 2010-11-30 05:05:49 PM
As for your fic, it's just as Richard said, mostly average with room for improvement. The errors aren't very large or noticeable, unless you're a grammar nazi, which I am. It's an interesting point to start diverging from canon and I look forward to seeing whether or not you can successfully do it.
I'll write a real review for you in a few chapters after you have a little more to read.
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