Well, I've not seem too many stories that diverge at this point and I'll be quite interested in seeing where you take this. As this is the first chapter, I can't say much, but you have avoided the worst of the typos I've seen in other stories.
Author's response
Thanks for the review! Yeah, the first chapter always seems to be a bit slow in most fics. As for the typos, I read a lot of fics myself and I've seen all of the homonym and synonym errors I want to. I definitely try to avoid those LOL.