Nice use of expression and such :)
Story line is a bit cliche but the way you portray the different characteristics of Frank and Gerard certainly hints to a more original creation of the characters.
Look forward to more!!
xo
Author's response
thankyou :)
yeah.. im trying desperatley thinking of ways to make it as un cliche as possible, I dont want it to be a story done 200 times before :)
thanks again :D
xo