really good one shot, your description is good and clear, you don't write WAY too much which i like but you don't write too little which is also good.
I like the idea of gerard been able to change and stuff.
WHY THE HELL WAS YOU STILL UP AT 3AM!!!! i was asleep then woman! god granny's should be asleep at 7pm not 3am that's for the young people... hehe...
anyway really good can't wait for more!!! love u xx