Review for It's Not Your Fault

It's Not Your Fault

(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-23 01:42:27 AM

Sticks bottom lip out
This was rather upsetting.
Smiles
But I'm glad Gerard ended up alright!
You could perhaps have drawn on Frankie's guilt a little more, maybe gone into more depth and detail. But, otherwise, this was really good. I enjoyed :)
xoxox
-Frankie.

Author's response

thank you :)
i might just go back and edit it a little

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