I'll admit, you've sparked my interest. I adore stories like this, that has different layers. I don't feel too over-whelmed after reading, but I feel I've read enough to want more.
So, that's what I'm asking of you, to write more.
I could picture the scene as if I was one of those children walking by, which is pure brilliance.
You got talent, kid.
Keep it up and throw us a new chapter some time soon, please?
I'll rate too.
Thank you so much! Sorry the first chapter's a little slow, things should pick up from here on out but there were a few things I had to set up. Next chapter should be out real soon, fingers crossed :) Seriously, you're wonderful, reading this made me smile so much!