Review for Sing It Like the Kids That Are Mean to You

Sing It Like the Kids That Are Mean to You

(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-29 01:29:58 AM

Tells you I like it

'I really hated how my stomach twisted up in knots whenever he looked at me – forget butterflies, more like full-grown anacondas.'

^I think this was my favourite sentence of the whole chapter. It was perfectly placed, and made you understand the feeling Frank was experiencing.

Awesome update.
Gags for more
I'll be patient ;) but you'll have to update soon to prevent a riot.
xoxox
-Frankie.

Author's response

awww! You made me blush! And no riot necessary, next chapter will be out in a bit :)

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