I've read some Frerards in my time, but none of them have had a first chapter that has me as hooked as this. Keep it up, I mean, if this is your first fix, then you have serious talent my friend.
Keep going because I have a feeling this could be good :D
update soon :D
Thanks! I've got plans to become a writer, but I figured I'd do a little fanfiction to combat some writer's block. I love ficwad, though, I'm gonna be here for a long time :) Next chapter should be out soon, things'll get steamy. I'm so glad you like it, keep reading!