I'll be honest and say I really enjoy your writing style. It doesn't waste any time on unnecessary details and the characters are interesting. I'm also glad to see your grammar is getting (slightly) better. I apologise if my last review sounded rude soooooooo ummmm I hope this one sounds better to you? XD Updaaaaaate.
thanks soz it took a while to reply my computer broke. and i will try and update soon ^-^