(#) pazed 2011-01-21
This has been a good read so far, and a most interesting and original underpinning to the time travel.
But I really got in here to say the scene with the twins and the banned list absolutely tickled me - fun and original choice of items to mention and a neat punch-line with why they were there!
Generally I like your choice of scenes, I think the story is progressing nicely. Hoping to see more of Sybil.
Cheers...p