i'm fan of your work, it is so well done, and pulished, wow, i love this chapter, I hope the next chapter :) this fascinated me, I love your story and I'll keep reading, I'll try to spread it to my friends, I like as unfold the characters slowly, and the evolution of jamie, I'm so impatient by the following chapter
Author's response
Oh thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'll get another chapter up in the next couple of days.
Thank you again :)