Great interpretation of the way the court and the family would have behaved (being tied to the constraints of court as a family, of course)! I don't like the use of the Tolkien Elvish, but it does add something unique. Great description of tenderness between the siblings, as well. Kudos!
Thank you for the review. This was one of my earlier writings. I had written it just after seeing it in theaters and couldn't remember the word that they had used for "father". I used what I had to work with. But thanks anyway. Aside from that blunder I am glad that you liked the story.