Review for Who's My Daddy?

Who's My Daddy?

(#) pumkinpie 2011-03-12

I'm enjoying the story but it's kinda hard to read, could you add some full stops? :D

Author's response

thankyou i understand that it's hard to read i write really fast and forget to put full stops in and the button isn't waorking properly at the moment i might have to move onto my dad's pc thankyou i hope you enjoy the rest of the story,

amy beth x