Make a sequel to this story! Please!
Everyone loved it, so you should continue. What have you got to lose?
:D I was always on edge, nervous with what was happening.
You're an excellent writer.
I will be making a sequel, if you read my response to ShortyGirl you will know why I haven't made on yet. My other story that I am working on is sort of a mental break form serial killers, to sort of smooth out some edges in my writing, to come back and make another part to Fatal Fascination.