Review for Burned
Burned
(#) Vampirechick1159 2011-03-26 09:00:10 AM
I like it...but you're doing that annoying thing with the point of view in your story where it flickers from first to third person.
Author's response
thank you for telling me i know that is a major prblem i have with my writing but i am working on it.
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