umm okay so on my phone my review looked much longer XD
yeah well this is brill and yeah your right so yeah he should of freaked a little :)
i love frankie he is so cute
oh i see then do it all the more hehe :D
oh no it's fine i like it, its more realistic that way i kinda hate it when they get together to quick and then the rest of it is kinda crap lol that sounds like my 'hold your breath' eepp :/
but yeah the past is fine
oh i love this so i garantee i will love your other one
thanks :) yeah, i find it easier to write about them when it takes a while for them to actually get together- it's just more like the way i guess i'd do things in real life if i was them lol :P and noooo! i love 'hold your breath, kid' the fact they get together sooner suits that story :) which reminds me...i need to go review the latest chapter! ooops!
i knooow, Frankie is just too cute haaha! hope i'm keeping the characters different enough from eachother- i find that kinda hard sometimes! D:
anyway, i'm gunna go review your 'hold your breath, kid' now xD
thanks for your reviewing awesomeness!