(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-04-02 05:27:18 AM
BUTTT i like the way you set this out its as if your starting the story with the end lol and i like the idea of mikey and frank. But mikey was a dick how could he hurt frankie :/
on the other hand your writing is really great and this story seems very interesting and intriguing
so good job
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