Your take on the animagus transformation was great. If I ever choose to make Harry and animagus in one of my stories, which I probably will at some point, this will be my basis of comparison.
I think it'd be pretty great if Harry sent his story into Rita Skeeter, or just had Luna do it for him.
Author's response
I am glad you enjoyed my take on becoming an animagus. I hope to raise the bar for the next schmuck who tries to write an animagus version of Harry. ~Jim