WOW. I didn't spot ANY mistakes. Either you're getting better or I'm losing my touch. I seriously hope it's not the latter.
Drunk mom. Original. But at least she's not abusive because I've seen that so many times on this site. Try to steer away from that cliché and toward an original plotline although trust me, I know how tempting it is to just let Frank get beaten up by his parents and go running off to Gerard. Been there. Done that.
This is coming on really nicely though. Look, I've added it to my subscriptions so I can watch it get better and better! How lovely am I? (Don't answer that.)
Author's response
Hehe, Yay I have no mistakes. Are you sure your not losing your touch?
And Frank isnt gonna run off to Gerard. What Frank said, he meant.
Thank you for adding this to your subscriptions :D