Review for Happiness or Misery?

Happiness or Misery?

(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-05-08 11:08:17 AM

Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd now Gerard feels like an ass. No wonder Frank became moody when Gerard said "Mama's boy". I mean, his mom died. BUT, Frank shouldn't keep it all inside. I know what it's like to keep it bottled up inside... It sucks. A lot. But he has the same reasoning: he doesn't feel like he knows anyone that well to tell them. His online journal actually is reaching out, though. True, it's online, where probably nobody from BHS reads his journal, but there are still people, out there, reading it and sympathizing (like I am now). Frank needs to reach out to a person, though, not the internet. Someone like Gerard. I saw that he likes Gerard, but can't stop annoying him. People who like other people do that. Eh, I feel for Frank, in short.
You should have left all the writing on the chapter instead of cutting it out. It would have sounded more Frank.
Update soon!

Author's response

hehe yes XD
yeah i know he got upset kinda like karma haha aww i know hehe he is going to get what he wantes soon enough XD hehe
wink wink
yeah sorry, i was going to do that but sounded more like it's coming from gerard this way and all you know?
anyway thank you sooo much for reviewing this :D
it really is nice that your still reading and reviewing. I also love the length of your review hehe its lovely
chazom
xx

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