Review for Happiness or Misery?

Happiness or Misery?

(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-08 01:25:38 PM

wow, that was amazing- beautifully written! Poor, Poor Frank...I feel really bad for him, but also for Gerard cause he must feel so guilty now :/ it all totally makes sense how Frank acted now...I really just want to give him a huuuuuge hug to make him better, but actually, it would probably just really freak him out :L I hope Gerard does the right thing and helps Frank...Frank could do with someone to comfort him and be there for him, and I'm sure Gerard's just the person :) That was just awesome...your writing is just getting better and better :) I love the way you tied everything into this chapter so brilliantly- it all made perfect sense- the way Frank got offended at Gee's comment, the way he picked on Gerard...just awesome. Your writing btw, not Frank's Mum :L
i see i'm early enough to rate this this time- yay! :D keep this epicness up and pleeeease update soon- i can't wait to read more!!

CosmicZombie xo

p.s. btw, the pen you got sounds really freakin awesome xD

p.p.s wow, that was a long review ^^ ooops...sorry lol

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