Review for Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix

Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix

(#) magicmuffinseeds 2011-05-13

hello and thanks to all you people who have re-commented, i'm sorry its been so long, the next chapter has been re-written so many times, so many ideas of what to do with snape...

also we find out whats going to happen on halloween, thats one moment i keep re-wrting as i cant seem to make the idea read as well as i want.

thank you all for the patience

MMS