Review for I don`t love you like I did yesterday

I don`t love you like I did yesterday

(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-05-15 03:48:01 AM

Good chapter and well written.(A word that is most definitely NOT in her vocabulary.) doesn't need a fullstop at the end, some words still need to be capatalised and "Franks" should be "Frank's". Always check through grammar and spelling before posting work, it distracts people like me from the good writing and dialogue.

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