Review for Stockholm Syndrome

Stockholm Syndrome

(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-05-15

Aha, an update! I love love /LOVE/ this chapter. Frank's all drunk, means he's saying things that could either be true or false. I get the sneaky suspicion Frank is feeling like he doesn't own Paulina anymore, and is more of a 'buddy', like as friends (or something more, seeing as he proposed to her twelve times in the limo). It is funny to see him drunk. I mean, I've seen him drunk ONCE on LOTMS, but that's not really anything, since he doesn't look drunk or anything. But this is hilarious, and I can never think of Frank un-tipsy on stage again. And Paulina, not wanting to run away? Not wanting to return to civilization? Whoa. I smiled upon reading that, knowing the Stockholm Syndrome was making it's way through her sanity, and making her fall for Frank. Now, I'm not sure what's going to happen with Gee-Bob-Mikes-Ray, but hopefully it won't be something very bad. Like, just a tad bit sad over her choice but happy their 'experiment' has gone well. Yeah, I can see that.
As for getting this fiction moving, DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT! This is amazing, and it kills me to wait forever on this! You gotta update more on this! And any length of chapter is just fine, even if it's 1k words, it's still an update.
Update soon!