Review for Pretty Eyes

Pretty Eyes

(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-06-01 04:46:30 PM

oh... no offense, but that ending kinda sucked. It was very abbrupt and how the fuck did gee die?

Author's response

Aw, sorry you didn't like it. :/ Yeah I know the ending was a bit abrupt, which is part of why I put in the extra chapter to cushion the blow.

But to answer your question: During the part where Bandit looks over at Lindsey while talking to Frank, she mentions he died of end stage lung cancer. Probably from his smoking habit.

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