Review for First of the Gang to Die

First of the Gang to Die

(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-20

Well done again Lorna. I have to say it is going to be epic. Can't wait to read the rest of it but not too quickly as this is the last of her work you guys found. That's a shame.

A few side notes:

1)It does suck there are no author notes in this but this woman is pretty much a legend,she'll carry on without them. She's still with you guys over there across the pond,with all of us.

2)As for what happened with Jane,that would have been a situation where it would have been wiser to hold your tongue but hey,I don't blame you one bit girl. (Not just because I love Nirvana either.) Go for after what you want in life,don't let the ignorants stop you. I imagine I would have said the same thing. I'm glad I live her in the U.S, "the land of the opportunity" and all that corny stuff,where we aren't told bullshit like that.

3)GOOGLE TRANSLATE NEEDS TO BE ABOLISHED! IT WILL FUCK YOU OVER FOR LACK OF MORE ELOQUENT TERMS! THAT IS ALL!

4)To the people at Uploading Lorna's Stories Industries:
I can't thank you enough for putting this stuff up Jeez,she had a family here of crazy,cyber people,you have no idea. :)

-Adnarim Smada