Review for Never Enough

Never Enough

(#) ONotz 2011-06-26 01:52:03 PM

You need to do a sequel. You know, like Frank rushes to Gerard and yells some thing like

"YOU FUCKING PROMISED"

Gerard looks him in the eyes, walks up to him and whispers. "Keep your voice down when you fucking talk to Jamia. Mans nothing to you? I was just your whore, you were my lover." And then he walks away from a shivering Frank and everyone looks at Frank and wonders what the outburst was from, Gerard goes back to lyn-z and kisses her cheek

They walk off laughing at a very saddened Frank. and he whispers

"I lied to Jamia. You were my lover to Gee." Or something like that.


Not to be like...writting the story but......ideas!

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