Review for Bedtime Stories

Bedtime Stories

(#) PartyPoison 2011-06-29

I have to admit that was mildly upsetting. But then Brendon saw the bright side and was all happy and so everything worked out.
Well it's good that you and your friend didn't fall out.
I would think that psychology would help with writing because then you can almost gauge how the readers will react to what your writing.
I would appreciate it if you did work on your other stories =) I think it would be a very good idea :P =)