Awesome story. I love the mood you create, its very well done. And the way you portraid the characters. The way you describe everything (places, people, events, feelings) is exelent and I love the use of metaphores and similies, as well as the attention to detail. Keep it up! You are writing an awesome story. :)
Author's response
whoa...thanks! :)
xx, a (aka fish soup. O_o)