This is probbably the best story i have read on this website. You have out done yourself. Every scen was brilliantly described and expressed with a careful selection of words. A really moving story and you should really think of writing as a career. The plot wound itslef around a dreadfully simple end. If this really is the end a fanatstic twist and it moved me greatly and good work on how how you left it open for the reader to decide what happens next. If there is another chapter, well ill be looking forward to it. There was only one personal thing that got to me and that was Gerard's charecter. In real life he is a sweetheart, but then again this is a fanfic and if it means Gee has to be mean, so be it. Overall, very moving and ver well written. Kept me to the edge of my seat and finished reading all chapters in one afternoon. Good Job!