Review for Baby Frankie, Gerard, and mikey

Baby Frankie, Gerard, and mikey

(#) HanginByASilentDream 2011-07-11 07:23:03 AM

i think its a really cute idea, but i can't really understand what is going on sorry.
you should proof read it more carefully, oh and dont put passing out for sleeping cuz that just confused me, as if they are actually passing out unconcious XD
i think its really good your trying, i'm sure you will get better :p
chazom
xx

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 658746
  • Stories: 39960

Recent Stories