Review for Baby Frankie, Gerard, and mikey
Baby Frankie, Gerard, and mikey
(#) HanginByASilentDream 2011-07-11 07:23:03 AM
i think its a really cute idea, but i can't really understand what is going on sorry.
you should proof read it more carefully, oh and dont put passing out for sleeping cuz that just confused me, as if they are actually passing out unconcious XD
i think its really good your trying, i'm sure you will get better :p
chazom
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you should proof read it more carefully, oh and dont put passing out for sleeping cuz that just confused me, as if they are actually passing out unconcious XD
i think its really good your trying, i'm sure you will get better :p
chazom
xx
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