Review for Auditions, People!!

Auditions, People!!

(#) RestlessStars 2011-07-17

I have two characters, a male and female who can be evil or wherever you might need them, but evil is cool, or you can pick one or the other (:

Name- Alissa

Gender- Female

Age- 18

Appearance- black hair down to shoulders with golden peekaboo highlights, layered and worn straight, a side fringe that covers right eye. 5'6, slender with long legs. Tan Skin. Mocha brown eyes that turn black if she's angry. Lip ring and ears pierced.

Background- Grew up with two brothers and father, mother died from breast cancer when she was very young. Was often bullied in school so she became isolated and started to be bitter towards everyone. She inherited her father's mad scientist thinking and used that to defend and amuse herself, skipped a few grades because of her ability to learn faster. Her brothers inherited her mother's traits. Spent most of her time inside her room while studying or messing with technology which she found out she could manipulate it. Was closer to her father because he understood her powers better, whereas her mother treated her differently than her brothers.

Special Skills- technopathy (manipulation of technology.) Superhuman vision. Memory manipulation. Innate capability (ability to have natural knowledge through learning.) superhuman intelligence. Prehensile/animation of hair (can change one's hair.)

Personality- very smart, rebellious, snarky, bitter against those who picked on her growing up and has a bit of hostility to people she meets. Stubborn. Sometimes abuses her powers to get revenge on someone.

Likes- Technology, studying, movies, animals, learning, nature, history, superpowers, school, people who share her same knowledge.

Dislikes- people who annoy her or pick on her. Music other than rock. Loud noises. Certain bugs like spiders or ants.

Additional info (This is not mandatory, but wanted)- is a vegeterian. Has asthma attacks if she exerts herself too much.
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Name- Caden

Gender- Male

Age- 19

Appearance- 6'2, muscular frame. Beige skin tone. Emerald green eyes. Clear complexion. Button nose. Rose pink lips. short dark brown hair that's styled in a mini mohawk style. No facial hair or piercings.

Background- was abandoned by his mother after giving birth to him when she was 16. She ran away and left him with her father who raised him until now. He adores his grandfather and has no idea who his real father is, his grandfather doesn't know either. His mom was very secretive and troublesome.

Special Skills - Chi powers. (marital arts. Super speed, reflexes, and strength.) Duplication of self.

Personality- Observant and mostly quiet. Likes to analyze his surroundings before he's comfortable, then he's talkative. Dark humored, sort of a smart ass. A little rebellious. Has a violent temper when pushed to his limits. Protective of certain things. Sort of a womanizer because he thinks most girls are like his mother.

Likes- parties, his strength and powers, messing with people, girls, social aspect of school, sports, his grandfather. Rock and hip hop music.

Dislikes- commitment, girls who want a relationship, studying, his mom, rules. People with different superpowers than him.

Additional info (This is not mandatory, but wanted)- even though they're opposites, he's good friends with Alissa due to their dark thinking. He's a vegan.

I got a bit carried away but this sounds amazing, I couldn't help myself (: Thanks for the chance and consideration.

Author's response

YAY A MALE CHARACTER!! And trust me, you did not get carried away! Thank you for audition!