Review for Harry's Second Chance
Now, which of the other four stories that I have half done should I work on? (all time travel stories -- a 6th year (NC-17, big Harem), a 5th year (NC-17, Harry and three girls), a 4th year (R), and a Marauder's era (R). Anyone have any preferences?
Work your way back along that list in list-forward temporally-backward order, please.
If you're looking for a challenge, try tackling 1ps viewpoint a la Draco664's Apprentice Harry/, one vp per chapter to start. That's about as far as you can get from your customary 3pu methods, and should give you a chance to really dig into each of your characters' psyches and pull them out for inspection. A lot was implied in /Harry's Second Chance but not explored (such as Hermione's evolving/merging vp, Sirius' aboutface on the Muggleborn -- were they even on speaking terms by the end of the story? -- and Snape's grudging maturation) so this could be a real playground for you.
However you do it, thanks for the good reads so far, and please keep 'em comin'. B*B
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