Review for Ready or Not

Ready or Not

(#) Shobs 2006-02-07 06:31:39 AM

It could have used a tad bit more detail, and the spacing between the paragraphs could have been done better. To make it more appealing to the eye and easier to read, you know?

Besides those little things, though, it was a cute and entertaining little fic. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Author's response

Thank you and it's been fixed.

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